how to love a friend who won't sit still
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Sep. 27th, 2004 | 11:47 pm
when we meet
you are
child on a playground swing
zoom by you going
and here again
but in motion
what do i do with this?
so i can choose to push
if i am prepared
and help you go more fun
or pull and slow you to me
if i know what i need
sometimes just watching you swing is nice
but then we did not touch
there are so many possibilities
you are
child on a playground swing
zoom by you going
and here again
but in motion
what do i do with this?
so i can choose to push
if i am prepared
and help you go more fun
or pull and slow you to me
if i know what i need
sometimes just watching you swing is nice
but then we did not touch
there are so many possibilities
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sea_of_change
date: Sep. 27th, 2004 10:09 pm (UTC)
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todfox
date: Sep. 27th, 2004 11:16 pm (UTC)
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triple_entendre
date: Sep. 28th, 2004 02:55 am (UTC)
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This is possibly the most straightforward and unintentional thing i've written
it represents (my) raw understanding
of a single metaphor
i was half a sentence into a livejournal comment when i got frustrated
trying to put the idea into words conversationally
and directly to the person so they would receive it
i just made an exasperated noise and wrote the metaphor out directly
and then added the first half of the first paragraph to clarify the setting
and then the last paragraph is partly a meditation of what was just written
I mostly wrote it out so i could remember/to catch the idea
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dangertim
date: Sep. 29th, 2004 10:55 am (UTC)
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And has a dash of ex-girlfriend flavor to it. I don't know if the chef intended this, but that's what it tastes like to me.
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